"i am the wanderer's wandering daughter
take all my pain and i mix it with water"
Italics imply a character is thinking. What is being said is not being said aloud. No one can here what said character is thinking to themselves; no one but you, the reader.
I have a story to finish. I mean, real incentive this time. Not just people actively reading what I'm writing. My grade depends on this. For some reason though, I'm still not motivated to write. It takes a lot to get into this guy's head. He's an alcoholic. He's real fucked up in the head. Totally doesn't care about anything. Doesn't have a job. Doesn't have to pay rent. Doesn't even have to worry about filling a kitchen with food. All that matters to him is his alcohol and writing down whatever the hell he feels like. Hot damn, he's got the life. Anyway, my point here was that I have to finish a story. I actually have to. But I haven't. I don't know that I want to. It has a lot to do with neither of my professors reading what I've given them so far. I feel like they think I only think I can write, but I'm starting to realize other people really think that do.
Anyway, I'm curious.
You see, people tell me they read this (even enjoy it sometimes) but the level of feedback I get (which is almost zero) suggests otherwise. I want a conversation with people. If I say something you like, or don't like, or if you just have anything to say SAY IT.
There's a place for comments, and they're always very appreciated. I would love to know what you think, what you like, what you don't like, all that jazz. So please, feel free.
And now I feel like I'm begging.
The clock says it's 2:16 in the morning.
I know I should sleep but I had some real vicious nightmares last night. It makes me anxious to think of turning out the lights.
3 Comments, Questions, and Concerns:
i read yours. i subscribe to others but just kind of... skim over it but i'll actually take the time to read yours.
other people write the same thing over and over (including myself) just in different words, they come to the same realization. "i am happy. i am sad. i should do this. i shouldn't have done that."
but you've got stories to tell (somewhere in there, just dig) and you've always got an interesting spin on something.
basically your blog's worth reading. lack of comments means nothing.
It's not that I think a lack of comments MEANS anything.
I just like reciprocity, yeah know?
I look forward to your comments on my blogs!! Because I like the conversation.
Or I'm just needy.
lol
lol it's ok, i know what you meant.
it feels good knowing that someone cares enough or is even just bothered enough to take the time out of their day to read something you've written.
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